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|  | *the sun woke me up*
« Thread Started on Mar 9, 2004, 4:02pm » | ![[Quote]](http://s1.images.proboards.com/buttons/quote.gif) |
words fill up the space,
tons of words bind with letter shapes,
even the space between becomes a link,
letter string of words together,
love becomes a solid ground.
there are no bends in this river,
my letter to u begins and never ends,
a single word spun out in a fishbowl,
bigger than the whole ocean put together,
the whole ocean is put together.
where water washes sun hangs out to dry,
all the time cry into big blue that is the sky,
send it up a sendup, oh my, the sky,
the sun woke me up this morning, calling me,
the beautiful stirrup for the perfectly shaped,
rolling into space the wave is looming.
T/04
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*in travelling lands i am, the dreamer of a dream, the dream of a dreamer*
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| | Re: *the sun woke me up*
« Reply #1 on Mar 9, 2004, 8:07pm » | |
Nice work Tania! And so nice to see you posting again. You must have been through quite an experience, nice to see an 'awakening' piece to start back.
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| | Re: *the sun woke me up*
« Reply #4 on Mar 11, 2004, 7:02pm » | |
you came back together with wonderful words,
thank you Tania,
*******
someone put a spell on words
high in the firmament of decline
and they can get lost sometimes
among fad recollections of current
but they come back at daybreak
so as not to overlook the moment
when letters fall from heaven
together with the aroma of poetry
J/04
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*this is my ark of dreams and i set sail into my dream-space* |
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Tania
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| | Re: *the sun woke me up*
« Reply #5 on Mar 12, 2004, 11:31am » | |
u guyz can inspire endlessly!
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*in travelling lands i am, the dreamer of a dream, the dream of a dreamer*
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Welcome back, T!! Lovely imagery here...
